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Thank-You Letters and
Other Job-Search Correspondence
After you have spoken or met with a company representative, it is not only
polite, but also appropriate to say thank you. It also helps you present yourself as an
organized and thorough candidate. This applies whether you have had an informational
interview or a formal interview, and whether or not you would like to work with the
company or organization. A thank-you letter is a simple acknowledgment of appreciation
that someone took time to talk with you.
GUIDELINES FOR THANK-YOU LETTERS
- As with cover letters, thank-you letters should be typed on quality paper and should be
addressed to the individual with whom you interviewed. If you were interviewed by more
than one person, it is thoughtful to write to each individual.
- Since you probably got to know the interviewer, the letter can be more informal and
personal than a cover letter.
- Reaffirm anything you liked about the organization and/or any ways you believe you will
meet their needs.
- If you forgot to mention something important about yourself that is applicable to the
position, you can mention it now.
- If you have decided you do not want the job, thank them for their time and inform them
of your decision.
- If you want the job more than ever let them know; enthusiasm is highly prized.
- Close by saying you are looking forward to hearing from them by whatever decision date
you have previously agreed upon. If you do not hear by then, it is appropriate to call and
ask about the status of your application.
Thank-you letters also:
- Remind the employer who you are
- Impress the employer with your courtesy and conscientiousness
- Remind the employer of your background and skills
- Show your enthusiasm and continued interest in the field or position
- Convey to the employer that you sincerely appreciate his or her time and consideration
Following are two examples of thank-you letters. One is for a job interview and the
other for an informational interview. After the thank-you letters youll find various
descriptions and samples of other job-search correspondence.
SAMPLE THANK-YOU LETTER FOLLOWING A JOB INTERVIEW
(Blocked Form)
1421 West Fifth Street
Boise, Idaho 83725
June 15, 200x
Mr. Howard Smith
Personnel Manager
Modern Advertising, Inc.
1440 Michigan Avenue
Chicago, Illinois 60611
Dear Mr. Smith:
Thank you for the opportunity to interview with you last Thursday, June
12, to discuss the position of copywriter at Modern Advertising, Inc. I was impressed with
the enthusiasm you displayed for Modern Advertisings future and the helpfulness of
your office personnel. Learning about Moderns present media campaign for the Houston
Sausage Company was exciting and demonstrated your creative approach to advertising.
Modern Advertising is a company with which I wish to be associated.
Your description of the special qualifications needed for this position
was especially interesting. My ability to work under pressure and meet tight deadlines has
already been proven in the advertising position I held with the Columbia Missourian. As I
stated at our meeting, I enjoy the challenge of a competitive environment in which success
is based on achievement.
I would also like to mention that since our meeting, I have received the
College Reporters Award for an article of mine published in the Columbia Missourian.
This is my first national award, and I am quite encouraged by this approval of my work.
Again, thank you for considering me for the position of copywriter. I look
forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Lisa Martin
In paragraph one, the applicant states why she is writing and mentions
the date of the interview and the position for which she was interviewed.
In paragraph two, the applicant points out what was particularly
valuable or interesting in the interview, briefly reiterates some of her qualifications,
and makes clear her continued interest in the organization and position.
In paragraph three, the applicant adds new information which might bear
upon the judgment of the employer. If there is nothing new or no information that you
forgot to bring out in the interview, this paragraph could be deleted or altered to suit
your needs.
In paragraph four, the applicant again thanks the employer and mentions
that she is looking forward to hearing soon about the results of the selection process.
SAMPLE THANK-YOU LETTER FOLLOWING AN INFORMATIONAL INTERVIEW
(Semi-blocked Form)
1804 Any Street
Boise, Idaho 83725
April 25, 200x
Ms. Christina Howard
Director of Forensic Pathology
Bower County Department of Law Enforcement
221 Fargo Avenue
Fineton, Ohio 36496
Dear Ms. Howard:
I would like to thank you for the time you took last Tuesday, April 22 to
talk with me about the field of forensic pathology. Although I have read materials
available about careers in this area, your firsthand knowledge was invaluable to my
understanding of forensic pathology and the fields potential for someone with my
interests and education.
I particularly enjoyed our discussion of your research in the area of
substance abuse and your description of the independence and responsibility needed by a
forensics researcher. The supervision given to an apprentice researcher with a B.S. degree
appeals to me greatly, and will certainly be taken into account when I finally determine
the career I wish to pursue.
Again, thank you for your time and for the pertinent information you
provided.
Sincerely,
John Smith
The letter above refers in particular to some of the matters discussed in the interview and
mentions how the interview was helpful to the writer.
Application Status-Check Letter
The purpose of this letter is to request information concerning the
status of your application, recap the history of your application, restate your interest
in the position, and state (when necessary) why you need a clarification of your status.
Following is an example of an application status-check letter:
Since our last meeting in an interview of March 16 at the Arts and
Sciences Center Career Office of Indiana University, I have not yet received word about
the status of my application for the position of systems analyst. I would like to know if
my application is still being considered.
Recently, another firm made an attractive offer to me, and I must soon
notify them of my decision. However, because of Unlimited Electronics excellent
training program, I am still interested in the possibility of joining your company. If you
need any further information, I will be happy to provide it. Likewise, I am available for
a second interview before May 10.
In any case, I need to know of the status of my application before that
date. I look forward to hearing from you.
Additional-Information Letter
This letter is sent in response to a written or verbal job offer
which does not provide all the pertinent information you need to make an informed
decision. In this letter you should indicate your interest in the employer and the offer,
ask specifically for the information you need, and express your appreciation for
cooperation you received. Following is an example of an additional- information letter:
Thank you for your letter of April 19 offering me the position of
pharmaceutical detailer with A.H. Robbins Company. The job offer is most attractive, and I
will be giving it my most serious consideration during the next few days.
I have one question about the Employee Benefits brochure which was
enclosed with your job offer. I believe you mentioned in our conversation of April 15 that
one months vacation was included in the standard benefits package. However, I could
not find reference to the length of vacation in the brochure. Could you please clarify
this matter for me?
I appreciate your offer and will let you know of my decision soon after
receiving this clarification. Thank you for all your efforts on my behalf.
Letter of Acknowledgment
When you receive a formal job offer, notify the employer that you
have received the offer, are giving it your serious consideration, and will notify him or
her of your decision as soon as possible, or by the date requested if a deadline was set.
Following is an example of a letter of acknowledgment:
Thank you for your letter of June 5 offering me the position of
archivist assistant with the Tennessee Historical Library. I was gratified to receive your
offer of $20,000 per year.
I will take every factor into consideration, and will let you know of my
decision within two weeks. Again, thank you for your offer to join the staff of the
Tennessee Historical Library.
Delay-Request Letter
At some point in your job search, you may have at least one job
offer in hand which requires a decision by a particular date while conditions make it
difficult to answer by the deadline. Extra time can be invaluable in assuring that your
eventual decision will be right, as well as your own peace of mind. It is acceptable to
contact the employer offering the job and request a delay. Negotiate a reasonable delay,
but remember the employer has deadlines too. Following is an example of a delay-request
letter:
Thank you for your letter of May 4. The job offer is attractive, and I
am giving it my very serious consideration.
Unfortunately, family matters have developed, and I am trying to take
these factors into my planning. I know you requested a final acceptance or refusal of your
offer by May 18, and I will meet this deadline if necessary. However, an extension of this
period of consideration to May 28 or 29 would be greatly appreciated, and it would make my
final decision that much more certain and correct. Please let me know if such an extension
can be arranged.
Thank you for all your previous efforts in my behalf, and I look forward
to hearing from you soon.
Letter of Rejection
As a courtesy, a formal letter of rejection should be sent to each
employer who extended an offer. Do not burn bridges - you may want to work for them in the
future. Let the employers know the reason for your rejection in a tactful, general way.
Following is an example of a letter of rejection:
Thank you for the offer, which you extended for a position as a
research assistant in the Department of the Interior extension library. The offer was very
attractive, and I had much to consider in reaching my decision.
Unfortunately, I am declining your offer to take a position as researcher
at the Library of Congress. Their specialized resources and location in Washington, where
my family resides, were the deciding factors in this difficult decision.
I appreciate your interest in me and wish to express again my gratitude
for your courtesy and consideration.
Letter of Acceptance
When you do make a decision, formally notify the employer. A letter
of acceptance should specify the job you are taking, your future superior (if known), your
salary, and when you will begin work. Following is an example of a letter of acceptance:
Thank you for your letter of March 12. I am pleased to accept your
offer for the position of Social Worker reporting to Mr. James Smith in the Drug Abuse
Unit at a salary of $650.00 per week.
I will have relocated to Los Angeles by May 10 and will be able to start
on May 20. The financial aid defraying my moving expenses is greatly appreciated and is a
principal factor in my ability to relocate so readily.
Thank you again for all your help. I look forward to working with you at
the Los Angeles Mental Health Clinic.
Articles and letter excerpted from: For Your
Action, A Practical Job-Search Guide for the Liberal Arts Student, by Wayne Wallace,
Carol Wagner, and Nancy Siska, 3rd edition, 1990, Indiana University Arts & Sciences
Career Planning & Placement Center, Bloomington, IN 47405.
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