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Thank-You Letters and Other Job-Search Correspondence

After you have spoken or met with a company representative, it is not only polite, but also appropriate to say thank you. It also helps you present yourself as an organized and thorough candidate. This applies whether you have had an informational interview or a formal interview, and whether or not you would like to work with the company or organization. A thank-you letter is a simple acknowledgment of appreciation that someone took time to talk with you.

GUIDELINES FOR THANK-YOU LETTERS

  1. As with cover letters, thank-you letters should be typed on quality paper and should be addressed to the individual with whom you interviewed. If you were interviewed by more than one person, it is thoughtful to write to each individual.
  2. Since you probably got to know the interviewer, the letter can be more informal and personal than a cover letter.
  3. Reaffirm anything you liked about the organization and/or any ways you believe you will meet their needs.
  4. If you forgot to mention something important about yourself that is applicable to the position, you can mention it now.
  5. If you have decided you do not want the job, thank them for their time and inform them of your decision.
  6. If you want the job more than ever let them know; enthusiasm is highly prized.
  7. Close by saying you are looking forward to hearing from them by whatever decision date you have previously agreed upon. If you do not hear by then, it is appropriate to call and ask about the status of your application.

Thank-you letters also:

  • Remind the employer who you are
  • Impress the employer with your courtesy and conscientiousness
  • Remind the employer of your background and skills
  • Show your enthusiasm and continued interest in the field or position
  • Convey to the employer that you sincerely appreciate his or her time and consideration

Following are two examples of thank-you letters. One is for a job interview and the other for an informational interview. After the thank-you letters you’ll find various descriptions and samples of other job-search correspondence.


SAMPLE THANK-YOU LETTER FOLLOWING A JOB INTERVIEW
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1421 West Fifth Street
Boise, Idaho 83725
June 15, 200x

 

Mr. Howard Smith
Personnel Manager
Modern Advertising, Inc.
1440 Michigan Avenue
Chicago, Illinois 60611

Dear Mr. Smith:

Thank you for the opportunity to interview with you last Thursday, June 12, to discuss the position of copywriter at Modern Advertising, Inc. I was impressed with the enthusiasm you displayed for Modern Advertising’s future and the helpfulness of your office personnel. Learning about Modern’s present media campaign for the Houston Sausage Company was exciting and demonstrated your creative approach to advertising. Modern Advertising is a company with which I wish to be associated.

Your description of the special qualifications needed for this position was especially interesting. My ability to work under pressure and meet tight deadlines has already been proven in the advertising position I held with the Columbia Missourian. As I stated at our meeting, I enjoy the challenge of a competitive environment in which success is based on achievement.

I would also like to mention that since our meeting, I have received the College Reporter’s Award for an article of mine published in the Columbia Missourian. This is my first national award, and I am quite encouraged by this approval of my work.

Again, thank you for considering me for the position of copywriter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

 

Lisa Martin

  • In paragraph one, the applicant states why she is writing and mentions the date of the interview and the position for which she was interviewed.

  • In paragraph two, the applicant points out what was particularly valuable or interesting in the interview, briefly reiterates some of her qualifications, and makes clear her continued interest in the organization and position.

  • In paragraph three, the applicant adds new information which might bear upon the judgment of the employer. If there is nothing new or no information that you forgot to bring out in the interview, this paragraph could be deleted or altered to suit your needs.

  • In paragraph four, the applicant again thanks the employer and mentions that she is looking forward to hearing soon about the results of the selection process.

 


SAMPLE THANK-YOU LETTER FOLLOWING AN INFORMATIONAL INTERVIEW
(Semi-blocked Form)

1804 Any Street
Boise, Idaho 83725
April 25, 200x

Ms. Christina Howard
Director of Forensic Pathology
Bower County Department of Law Enforcement
221 Fargo Avenue
Fineton, Ohio 36496

Dear Ms. Howard:

I would like to thank you for the time you took last Tuesday, April 22 to talk with me about the field of forensic pathology. Although I have read materials available about careers in this area, your firsthand knowledge was invaluable to my understanding of forensic pathology and the field’s potential for someone with my interests and education.

I particularly enjoyed our discussion of your research in the area of substance abuse and your description of the independence and responsibility needed by a forensics researcher. The supervision given to an apprentice researcher with a B.S. degree appeals to me greatly, and will certainly be taken into account when I finally determine the career I wish to pursue.

Again, thank you for your time and for the pertinent information you provided.

Sincerely,

 

John Smith


The letter above refers in particular to some of the matters discussed in the interview and mentions how the interview was helpful to the writer.


Application Status-Check Letter

The purpose of this letter is to request information concerning the status of your application, recap the history of your application, restate your interest in the position, and state (when necessary) why you need a clarification of your status. Following is an example of an application status-check letter:

Since our last meeting in an interview of March 16 at the Arts and Sciences Center Career Office of Indiana University, I have not yet received word about the status of my application for the position of systems analyst. I would like to know if my application is still being considered.

Recently, another firm made an attractive offer to me, and I must soon notify them of my decision. However, because of Unlimited Electronics’ excellent training program, I am still interested in the possibility of joining your company. If you need any further information, I will be happy to provide it. Likewise, I am available for a second interview before May 10.

In any case, I need to know of the status of my application before that date. I look forward to hearing from you.

Additional-Information Letter

This letter is sent in response to a written or verbal job offer which does not provide all the pertinent information you need to make an informed decision. In this letter you should indicate your interest in the employer and the offer, ask specifically for the information you need, and express your appreciation for cooperation you received. Following is an example of an additional- information letter:

Thank you for your letter of April 19 offering me the position of pharmaceutical detailer with A.H. Robbins Company. The job offer is most attractive, and I will be giving it my most serious consideration during the next few days.

I have one question about the Employee Benefits’ brochure which was enclosed with your job offer. I believe you mentioned in our conversation of April 15 that one month’s vacation was included in the standard benefits package. However, I could not find reference to the length of vacation in the brochure. Could you please clarify this matter for me?

I appreciate your offer and will let you know of my decision soon after receiving this clarification. Thank you for all your efforts on my behalf.

Letter of Acknowledgment

When you receive a formal job offer, notify the employer that you have received the offer, are giving it your serious consideration, and will notify him or her of your decision as soon as possible, or by the date requested if a deadline was set. Following is an example of a letter of acknowledgment:

Thank you for your letter of June 5 offering me the position of archivist assistant with the Tennessee Historical Library. I was gratified to receive your offer of $20,000 per year.

I will take every factor into consideration, and will let you know of my decision within two weeks. Again, thank you for your offer to join the staff of the Tennessee Historical Library.

Delay-Request Letter

At some point in your job search, you may have at least one job offer in hand which requires a decision by a particular date while conditions make it difficult to answer by the deadline. Extra time can be invaluable in assuring that your eventual decision will be right, as well as your own peace of mind. It is acceptable to contact the employer offering the job and request a delay. Negotiate a reasonable delay, but remember the employer has deadlines too. Following is an example of a delay-request letter:

Thank you for your letter of May 4. The job offer is attractive, and I am giving it my very serious consideration.

Unfortunately, family matters have developed, and I am trying to take these factors into my planning. I know you requested a final acceptance or refusal of your offer by May 18, and I will meet this deadline if necessary. However, an extension of this period of consideration to May 28 or 29 would be greatly appreciated, and it would make my final decision that much more certain and correct. Please let me know if such an extension can be arranged.

Thank you for all your previous efforts in my behalf, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Letter of Rejection

As a courtesy, a formal letter of rejection should be sent to each employer who extended an offer. Do not burn bridges - you may want to work for them in the future. Let the employers know the reason for your rejection in a tactful, general way. Following is an example of a letter of rejection:

Thank you for the offer, which you extended for a position as a research assistant in the Department of the Interior extension library. The offer was very attractive, and I had much to consider in reaching my decision.

Unfortunately, I am declining your offer to take a position as researcher at the Library of Congress. Their specialized resources and location in Washington, where my family resides, were the deciding factors in this difficult decision.

I appreciate your interest in me and wish to express again my gratitude for your courtesy and consideration.

Letter of Acceptance

When you do make a decision, formally notify the employer. A letter of acceptance should specify the job you are taking, your future superior (if known), your salary, and when you will begin work. Following is an example of a letter of acceptance:

Thank you for your letter of March 12. I am pleased to accept your offer for the position of Social Worker reporting to Mr. James Smith in the Drug Abuse Unit at a salary of $650.00 per week.

I will have relocated to Los Angeles by May 10 and will be able to start on May 20. The financial aid defraying my moving expenses is greatly appreciated and is a principal factor in my ability to relocate so readily.

Thank you again for all your help. I look forward to working with you at the Los Angeles Mental Health Clinic.

Articles and letter excerpted from: For Your Action, A Practical Job-Search Guide for the Liberal Arts Student, by Wayne Wallace, Carol Wagner, and Nancy Siska, 3rd edition, 1990, Indiana University Arts & Sciences Career Planning & Placement Center, Bloomington, IN 47405.

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